WARNING: Contains some strong language (Oh my!)
So I’ve had
quite the week. I cannot remember the
last time so much stuff happened almost at once. Now, where to begin. Well, it
started pretty promising. Last Friday I decided I’d had it with drowning in
student loans and went looking for a job. Then, on Tuesday, I went to an
interview and I got the job. Oh yeah, but then I came home and found Emma had
packed her things.
“Emm?
What’s all this?” I asked her in a quiet tone. I had this huge, awkward smile
on my face, as I had just opened the door, bursting with pride, eager to tell
my lovely girlfriend about my job interview. She was sitting at the bar stool,
holding the silver keys to our apartment in her right hand, playing with her
beautiful brown, loosely-curled hair with the other. She had braided them into
a couple of stray plaits. God, I’m going to miss that hair.
“I’m sorry,
Trip,” she said as she stood up. Her voice was faint, as if this was all a huge
embarrassment to her. “But I think you and I both know things have been slowly
falling apart between us for some time now.”
“What?! NO!
No, no, no, wait,” I uttered as I approached her, trying to grab her hands to
prevent her from taking those suitcases and leaving. “Wait! I got the job! I’m
not deadbeat anymore! And I’m finally making progress on my research project.
C’mon, Emm! We can work this out. Let’s at least talk this over, alright?”
“We already
have, many times,” she said as she flung off my hands off of her wrists and
grabbed her bags. “I just… I don’t need this anymore. And neither do you. We
both deserve better than this. So please, just stop. Don’t make this any harder
for yourself.”
With those
words she stormed off. I would not let go just like that. I followed her down
the spiral staircase of our apartment building.
“Emm!” I
shouted. I could hear someone open their door upstairs and approach the railing
to gawk. “You can’t just leave. For God’s sake, we have a life together!”
“If you
paid any attention to what I said, you’d know that’s not the case. I’ll be back
for the rest of my things some other time.” And with that, she shut the door to
the building.
“Oh yeah?!
Well fuck you, too!”
Needless to
say, I was a bit on edge after that. But I digress. Nobody wants to hear this,
all this personal drama. The week had only just begun! On Wednesday I went to
my new job. I forgot to trim my beard and my right hand was all covered in
bloodied bandages and possibly some leftover pieces of mirror, so I can’t say I
performed that well. I did see a note, though. Someone was looking for a room
to rent. Considering I now had twice as much rent to pay, I gave the guy a
call.
I saw him
Thursday after work. His name was Kurt, though I could not for the life of me
decipher his last name from that impressionist handwriting. He couldn’t have
been much older than me, and yet there was something surprisingly dignified
about him. Not in the way he dressed, though. His long, raven hair was tied in
a loose pony tail and nicely complimented with a goatee. He was wearing an acid
green baseball cap, coupled with sunglasses he refused to take off. He was as
pale as a corpse. That was all coupled with a simple black t-shirt and denim
slacks. Not exactly dignified, and yet he somehow felt the part. He moved in
right away. It was all kinda suspicious, though. He had next to no things and
would sleep through the whole day. He told me he worked as a DJ, so he would
need the rest. I would have thought he was a vampire.
And then
came Friday and boy, what a day it was! On my way to work I saw Emma, complete
with a brand new short, blonde hairdo, red lipstick and a whole entourage of
beautiful, blonde-haired people. I know she noticed me, she was looking at me
right when I threw a gaze in her direction. Then she whispered something into
some muscle-bound, blonde Apollo’s ear. Fuck that bitch. Too bad that made me
angry. I lost my job that day. I don’t want to go into detail, but the case was
pretty ugly. Let’s just say I need more money now than I did before that. That evening,
when I finally returned home after all the proceedings, Kurt asked me if I
wanted to go with him to the club he works at. I said yes. I don’t really know
why. I think I just needed to get my mind off all of the crap that happened
last week.
The music
was great, the girls dancing at the club were hot, the booze was incredible,
but it was all so joyless. I just couldn’t stop thinking about her. I stepped
out of the club. It was raining, just my luck. I tried to call her, but to no
avail. I tried for another fifteen minutes. My hair stuck to my face. I finally
got fed up with waiting and hurled the phone to the ground. It bounced off the
sidewalk and landed somewhere in a nearby alley. I instantly regretted doing
that.
I hurried
over there to search for my phone, but was suddenly sucker-punched in the face
and fell down on the wet pavement. I got up and noticed none other than the
blonde pretty-boy from before holding me by the throat in midair. He gave me a
twisted smile, exposing prominent fangs. Holy
fuck, I thought to myself, as I desperately fought for my breath. He then
threw me against a wall in the alley. I could breathe again, but my back and
head were aching really hard. He was crouching right above me as his
fingernails extended into extremely long talons. I saw him take a swing at me.
I was sure I was done for. But then I heard a loud thump, and two voices growling at each other. It all sounded pretty
feral, kinda like cats fighting for territory, only much more terrifying. I
took a look at what was going on. Someone was wrestling with blondie-boy.
Although “wrestling” might be a bit of a stretch. The Adonis was trying to get
up, as the other person had him pinned down. The blonde guy tried to grab him
by the throat – his signature move, I assume – but as he did that, the other
man cut it clean off with talons similar to the blonde guy’s. Blood gushed out
of the open wound and the man started screaming. I saw the severed hand writhe
in a pool of splattered blood. Then it stood up on its fingers and lunged
itself at the attacker. He easily dodged it, though, and the hand crashed into
the wall, falling down limp like a dead fish. The men were speaking to each
other in some language I couldn’t understand, though my college education tells
me it might have been Hebrew. The conversation soon ended, however. As the
blonde man squirmed, his attacker performed a finishing blow, piercing his
victim’s heart. The victim suddenly became still. The winner took out the talons
out of the body, and licked them clean of the blood. He later turned his face
toward me. His eyes were glowing red, there was a trail of blood trickling from
his lips, and yet I instantly recognized that long, black hair and goatee, that
pasty white skin.
“I’m sorry
you had to see that, Trip,” said Kurt in that deep voice of his.
“Yeah,” I
whispered. What did I tell you? My week was fucking fantastic.
Very good first person perspective. Easy to get in to and interesting!
ReplyDeleteHaha the last sentence made me laugh :D I'm not really into vampire stories, but you have a really pleasant style of writing, so I enjoyed it. The violent scene is very dynamic and easy to visualize (e.g. "falling down limp like a dead fish").
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