The way he said it made it seem like
he knew something I didn’t. Like something bad was going to happen. The entire
walk home from the station, I felt like someone was watching me. Thankfully, I
reached my apartment building perfectly safe. I opened the door with a small
sigh of relief and called out “Hey.” I got a “hey” in return. It came from the
kitchen. Ellie was sitting by the table, tablet in one hand, an apple with the
other. Her green eyes were moving left and right as she was reading an article
of some sort. She’d done her hair in two thick braids today. A new look I think
suited her nicely.
“How was school today?” I asked her
as I placed my coat on the hanger.
“Fine,” she said with a shrug and
took a bite of the apple.
“Is that schoolwork?”
“No,” she said matter-of-factly.
“It’s all over the news. The president announced a full global disarmament.”
“So soon?” I asked in a surprised
tone, but in truth, I felt nothing. I didn’t feel like that knowledge affected
me at all. It seemed like just a formality. The whole world was finally at
peace now, anyway. No wars, no poverty, no hunger, no disease. All under one
federal government. A disarmament seemed like an afterthought at this point.
“You ready to go to bed, though? You done with all your homework?”
“Yup,” she said as she locked her
tablet. “I aced a biology quiz today. Is everything okay, Angie? You look
pretty shaken?”
“It’s nothing. There was just this
creepy guy on the train. I don’t really wanna talk about it.”
“Oh, another admirer?” she said with
a grin on her face that she always used if she wanted to annoy me. “When can I
expect him? You know, if you want me to print more breakfast you have to tell
me beforehand.”
“Funny. And if you keep sassing me,
maybe I can give Jeremiah’s mom a call and tell her about what happened at the
Friday party you guys had, huh?”
“But nothing happened,” she pouted.
“Yes, and that guy was just a
creeper I met. So let it go,” I said as I made my way to the bathroom. Before I
completely took my top off, I stopped in my tracks and turned around to face
Ellie. “Oh, right. Josh invited us both for a bike ride this Saturday.”
“O, happy day,” she said as she
twirled one of her braids. “What a glorious turn of events.”
“Just try to be nice, okay? He is
pretty nice, and I like him.”
“Yeah, yeah…”
I took a quick shower and went
straight to bed. I was pretty exhausted. Traces of long lost memories swirled
around my head, then some familiar faces. Ellie, Josh… And that guy on the
train. In my dream, I was trying to run away from him as he followed me on the
station. He kept wishing me a safe journey. All I knew was that I wanted to get
away and I didn’t care for any journey.
That’s when I woke up. Or at least,
I thought I did. I felt a huge pain in my head. Everything around me was white,
though I was still in my room. It was some sort of light. A blinding white
light so bright that I felt like I was floating among a huge white nothingness.
The pain intensified. I then noticed a red glowing orb float out of my
forehead. It looked like a red firefly, though it flew up in a straight path,
further and further away from me, until suddenly, there was a rift in the
whiteness. Flames protruded into twelve different directions, and in the middle
of it all was what seemed to be a rainbow-colored eye. The eye opened wider and
wider, the red orb of light heading right in the middle of its pupil. When it
finally reached it, it was engulfed by the eye. The pupil became red and burst
into a blue flame. The twelve flames started spinning and what seemed like a
human silhouette appeared in the middle of the blue flame. Eleven human shadows
appeared around me. Then I heard a voice. A completely featureless voice, that
was for some reason extremely imposing. I started to tremble.
“The Contact is lucid. Commence
operation.”
I woke up gasping for breath, cold
sweat trickling down my spine. The sun covered the room in bright stripes as it
shone from between the blinds. I’d never felt such relief. Something was off,
though. The apartment was quiet – it must have still been pretty early if Ellie
still wasn’t up. There seemed to be some sort of commotion outside, however. I
approached the window and opened the blinds. A lot of people had come out to
the street and pointed at the sky, talking to each other excitedly. I looked up
to where they were all pointing. I didn’t need to look hard. The entire sky was
dotted with countless white speck of light. Instinctively, I touched my
forehead. The point where I’d felt the red light leave it in my dream. That
somehow made me feel calmer. It made me feel more at ease with the fact that
they’d come. Whatever was coming my way, I knew I could take it.
I've said it before and I'll say it again. You're very good at writing dialogue. Your characters are very believable and it's easy to put yourself in the scene as if it's really happening.
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